Thunder & Rain or Rolling in Pain

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The Reverend
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Date Joined Apr 2009
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   Posted 4/28/2009 7:09 AM (GMT -6)   
Thunder & Rain or Rolling in Pain
We see the clouds on the horizon
As I take my Salazopyrin
The thunder starts to roll
All the drugs have taken toll
The lightning starts flashing
As I feel my world a crashing
The wind is now a blowin
must take more pills till I'm glowin
Trees come crashing down
any smiles I had are now Frowns
Nail and tin start to fly
I can't help it I just cry
Now the wind shallows it starts to abait
Few that was almost more than I could take
It flashes and rumbles as it moves away
No more, no more pain I pray
By The Reverend
Hope you like, this is what most days feel like for me, often more than once in a day. 

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   Posted 4/28/2009 8:53 AM (GMT -6)   

This was a very nice poem!

The Reverend
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Date Joined Apr 2009
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   Posted 4/29/2009 9:05 AM (GMT -6)   
Thanks TayIsa are there any more poets out there who can't sleep.

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   Posted 5/2/2009 10:11 PM (GMT -6)   
Oh boy! I think a lot of us can relate! I'm sorry you feel like that so often! It's a great poem, though!


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   Posted 5/15/2009 10:50 AM (GMT -6)   
Well written, wow, nice, need I say more?

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