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Sadgirl2
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Date Joined Dec 2004
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   Posted 12/30/2004 9:23 AM (GMT -7)   
I hope you all don't mind my poetry. I've never written any before these postings (I know you can tell!). My therapist is urging me to write to help me get my feelings out. If you get tired of them just let me know...
 
Here goes
 

Life

 

The world swiftly spins around

Containing demands, expectations, needs…

As if time had grown wings

And taken flight

Strength slowly sucked away

Leaving the weak behind

Unable to keep up

Their bodies crying with agony from within

Not knowing where to turn

What to do


snohare
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Date Joined Oct 2004
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   Posted 1/1/2005 9:19 PM (GMT -7)   

Yo !

nono  Keep it coming Terri !

Ass kickingly good. yeah A much more concentrated version of what I used to try and say in my diaries.

(Maybe it's just my native Scots stinginess, but I'm really getting to like this free poetry kick on this forum. Not least because it saves me having to describe things when other people do it so well.)


Ralph
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Date Joined Aug 2004
Total Posts : 139
   Posted 1/2/2005 9:52 AM (GMT -7)   
Very nice Terri :-)

I wish I had the ability to be poetic.

Snowhare, you have a way with words that is beyond poetry. At least it has seemed so to me and others.

I may try some myself, but it may contain many one sylable words.

Roses are red ..........etc tongue

Ralph
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   Posted 1/2/2005 9:55 AM (GMT -7)   
Sorry I meant snohare redface

Sadgirl2
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Date Joined Dec 2004
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   Posted 1/2/2005 1:53 PM (GMT -7)   
Thanks
Ralph & Snohare. I am feeling so low...you're kind words are helpful...

Cammiejo
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Date Joined Jan 2005
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   Posted 1/28/2005 7:13 PM (GMT -7)   
    Hey Girl ,
 
Please Keep your Potery Coming Terri your kind words a more help ful then you will every Know Just keep them coming
C

havta_b_luvd
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   Posted 1/29/2005 7:45 AM (GMT -7)   
Terri, good job. any way you can get your feelings out is a good thing. And for me, it seems easier to try to write it in poetry style rather than say..this is what's going on blah blah blah blah blah. And if no one makes any remarks, so be it, I said it and hopefully I"m feeling better. It's difficult for me to set here and say....when I was a child....I've screwed up this way.....no one understands me....so if I put it in a "fun" form I can say the things I can't normally say.

Just my two cents.
Be well hun
~Tina~


Sadgirl2
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Date Joined Dec 2004
Total Posts : 110
   Posted 1/29/2005 9:36 PM (GMT -7)   

Thanks Tina,

Your two cents is always welcome. Do you have any poems to add?

Terri

 

 


Terri B
 
 

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