a poem! hope you like it

New Topic Post Reply Printable Version
[ << Previous Thread | Next Thread >> ]

New Member

Date Joined Jan 2005
Total Posts : 11
   Posted 1/31/2005 6:22 PM (GMT -6)   

No title (interpret as you wish!)


My mind dissecting

Thoughts reflecting

Like an image in the water

A false representation of depth and feeling

As if the world was reeling

I sink my hands into my face

Laced with tears making patterns and shapes

In their effort to escape

A body wrought with pain

Self inflicted

Thoughts that maim

My body wrenches out the sobs

They are my words now

And how I look to them for comfort.


Regular Member

Date Joined Dec 2004
Total Posts : 110
   Posted 1/31/2005 7:55 PM (GMT -6)   
This is great work! I am sorry for your pain sad
Terri B

New Member

Date Joined Jan 2005
Total Posts : 11
   Posted 1/31/2005 8:17 PM (GMT -6)   
funny how all the good stuff comes from sadness/anger. lol! Thanks!

Regular Member

Date Joined Jan 2005
Total Posts : 104
   Posted 2/1/2005 11:59 AM (GMT -6)   
This is so beautiful! You're extremely talented!
And days go by
I can feel them flying
Like a hand out the window in the wind
And cars go by
Yeah it's all we've been given
So you better start living right now
Cause days go by

New Member

Date Joined Jan 2005
Total Posts : 11
   Posted 2/1/2005 7:50 PM (GMT -6)   
Thanks! that means a lot!

New Member

Date Joined Jan 2005
Total Posts : 7
   Posted 2/2/2005 12:30 AM (GMT -6)   
New Topic Post Reply Printable Version
Forum Information
Currently it is Wednesday, October 26, 2016 12:21 PM (GMT -6)
There are a total of 2,712,385 posts in 299,089 threads.
View Active Threads

Who's Online
This forum has 153668 registered members. Please welcome our newest member, xiguai201.
318 Guest(s), 15 Registered Member(s) are currently online.  Details
George_, klwxo95, Tagier, ppm guy, Girlie, Huddie, ChickNorris, pmm73, rockyfords, ks1905, InTheShop, CiardoJ, nynj2008, Tall Allen, iPoop

Follow HealingWell.com on Facebook  Follow HealingWell.com on Twitter  Follow HealingWell.com on Pinterest

©1996-2016 HealingWell.com LLC  All rights reserved.

Advertise | Privacy Policy & Disclaimer