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   Posted 6/27/2008 6:54 AM (GMT -7)   

my breathing is fast,

my heart pounds hard,

my head it aches,

and my mind is at race.

i focus and sit still,

hoping the end will soon be near.

im tired, i'm weak…

sometimes I just want to scream!

my moods there way up and high

and sometimes they're low…low to the ground,

mind is racing and still won't quit,

help me Lord before i slip!

i wish this pain would go away,

but i know i have to live and let it stay.

i'm not doing this for me you see,

i'm living for you,

so you will be free,

not like me… wrapped up in this insanity!


 Bipolar - August 2004
     Crohns disease - 1995 
Arthritis & Fibromyalgia 
Leo Buscaglia

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   Posted 6/27/2008 7:01 AM (GMT -7)   
Wow! Thanks sukay. That was really great. Really powerful. I like this idea. I'll see if I have anything specifically about bipolar...
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Date Joined May 2008
Total Posts : 136
   Posted 7/1/2008 1:02 PM (GMT -7)   

Nice poem Sukay.  here is another one of mine.



Feeling down all the time,

Can’t seem to climb up.

Whenever I feel lifted

I fall back down again.


Getting closer to the bottom,

The light getting further away.

Getting darker and darker,

Down in the depths of my soul.


I know there is nowhere to go

Nowhere but up from here.

But it just seems so hard,

So hard to take the first step.


To move towards healing,

Back up the top.

The top of this dark well,

This well that is my being.


My life is standing still,

But life goes on around me.

I see things so differently,

Different from all of you.


How I wish I could be normal

And not have all this confusion.

To be able to walk in the light of dawn.

The dawn of life and understanding.


This is my wish,

This is my goal.

To take the first step

To healing my soul.




I don't suffer from insanity, I enjoy every minute of it!

Post Edited (twisted71) : 7/1/2008 2:05:01 PM (GMT-6)

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