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twisted71
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   Posted 8/1/2008 2:29 AM (GMT -7)   
My tdoc has been encouraging me to keep working on my poetry and I would like to share my latest one with you guys.  Please let me know what you guys think of it.
 

On the Verge

 

Standing on the verge

Right on the edge

Looking into darkness

Feeling so cold

 

Flying up high

Soaring in the clouds

Seeing only brightness

Bathed in the warmth

 

Neither happy nor sad

Totally numb inside

Feeling nothing at all

I’m completely empty

 

Always falling apart

Broken into pieces

Wanting to be whole

But absolutely helpless

 

Whatever I try

No matter what I do

This is my life

This will always be me

 

AJL 7-25-08


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serafena
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   Posted 8/1/2008 8:20 AM (GMT -7)   
That's wonderful, twisted. Thanks for sharing another poem with us. It captures a crucial feeling we can probably all relate to.

serafena
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