Poem: Behind Her Smile

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Sadgirl2 Regular Member Date Joined Dec 2004 Total Posts : 110	Posted 12/12/2004 5:35 PM (GMT -6)
	Behind Her Smile Behind her smile Is a girl who feels worthless but strives to be worthy Is a girl who feels unloveable but wants to be loved Is a girl who feels ugly but wants to be pretty Behind her smile Are great feelings of sadness Not being good enough Stupid Uncaring Unkind Behind her smile Is a girl reaching desperately for life not knowing if she wants to live Behind her smile Is pain, sadness and lingering hope for the future Behind her smile Is just a girl... Back to Top

snohare Veteran Member Date Joined Oct 2004 Total Posts : 2088	Posted 12/12/2004 9:51 PM (GMT -6)
	...wanting to be free. Back to Top

Sadgirl2 Regular Member Date Joined Dec 2004 Total Posts : 110	Posted 12/13/2004 8:06 PM (GMT -6)
	Thanks Snohair...I added your ending Back to Top

beyondloser New Member Date Joined Dec 2004 Total Posts : 12	Posted 12/13/2004 10:47 PM (GMT -6)
	wow, i really enjoyed that...honestly. -Danielle Back to Top

snohare Veteran Member Date Joined Oct 2004 Total Posts : 2088	Posted 12/14/2004 9:10 PM (GMT -6)
	Yeah, me too. All I can ever manage is doggerel...good for Xmas cards and crackers, but hardly profound. But I suppose poetry, like dignity, lies not in the words, but in the soul. Either way, Terri B., you have it. Back to Top

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