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beyondloser New Member Date Joined Dec 2004 Total Posts : 12	Posted 12/13/2004 10:45 PM (GMT -6)
	yea, here are just some poems i wrote to maybe entertain some people. nothing special, so it wont hurt my feelings if no one likes them, I just can't sleep tonight, I've had a bad day.. "under new ownership" Despise me, it doesn't even matter Bring me down and make me feel it Take my wrists, and slit my wounds Push me down, Put me down Come undone for me, show me what you've got Prove that you are worthy, tell me that I'm not Show me your obessions to prove that you're not real Shove away my doubts, tell me how I feel Open up my insides to see what I can show Take a look inside me and then you'll really know What I have to offer an what I need to do How much pain you cause me And how my mind craves you. "mislead to this" This doesn't seem right The walls are caving in My feelings not expressed The power of this sin This tragic loss I feel The loss of any hope This painful ride of life Sit back and take it slow Why was I not led to know Instead led to beleive Beleive in a hopeless world The downfall of you and me The fall isnever ending The pain has just begun Everything turns to nothing The hate is soon to come Thenames in which you call me The hurt it seems to bring This endless pain and sorrow The lies you choose to believe "forever" The ways in which I jurt myself Are those only to hurt you too I've said a prayer a thousand times Not knowing what else to do It's resulted down to this selfishness My emotions swoop and sway If you could just be mine again Forever and a day -Danielle Back to Top

Sadgirl2 Regular Member Date Joined Dec 2004 Total Posts : 110	Posted 12/14/2004 5:43 PM (GMT -6)
	I like the way you express yourself. I hope you feel better soon. TB Back to Top

snohare Veteran Member Date Joined Oct 2004 Total Posts : 2088	Posted 12/15/2004 8:37 PM (GMT -6)
	To borrow an analogy from another part of my life Danielle, your imagery packs a punch like a twelve pound sledge; compact, but powerful ! It is a real delight to me to have found poetry here on this forum. Particularly on a subject I can relate to. For a long time I was inclined not to lurk here, I thought it would bring back bad memories and dangerous trains of thought; but instead I find once again that as so often, at the boundary between dark and light we find meaning in life, and life in expression. Keep 'em coming, you guys...or I might be forced to tell you my home made Xmas cracker jokes Back to Top

Ralph Regular Member Date Joined Aug 2004 Total Posts : 139	Posted 12/17/2004 1:24 PM (GMT -6)
	Snohare On Poetry "I'm really not a poet, although my toes show it, they're Longfellows" Back to Top

snohare Veteran Member Date Joined Oct 2004 Total Posts : 2088	Posted 12/17/2004 8:46 PM (GMT -6)
	Ooh, now that's a cracker ! Nice to see you're still on the go Ralph. I've been posting with the Crohnies mainly, too short on time and sleep for my usual edifying stuff ! (That's me with my sleeping cap on, in case you hadn't guessed. Only here during the wee sma' hours...when will Peter come up with a snoozing emoticon ? ) I'd say I "ode" you all a bespoke Xmas poem, but you'd probably be "a verse" to it's humour... Back to Top

havta_b_luvd Regular Member Date Joined Oct 2004 Total Posts : 56	Posted 12/23/2004 6:47 AM (GMT -6)
	Excellent!! I think the way you teenager express yourselves in your poetry is awesome!! It's a good way to release. My daughter does the same thing. Keep em coming hun! ~Tina~ Back to Top

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