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beyondloser
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Joined : Dec 2004
Posts : 12
Posted 12/13/2004 9:45 PM (GMT -6)
yea, here are just some poems i wrote to maybe entertain some people. nothing special, so it wont hurt my feelings if no one likes them, I just can't sleep tonight, I've had a bad day..

"under new ownership"

Despise me, it doesn't even matter

Bring me down and make me feel it

Take my wrists, and slit my wounds

Push me down,

Put me down

Come undone for me, show me what you've got

Prove that you are worthy, tell me that I'm not

Show me your obessions to prove that you're not real

Shove away my doubts, tell me how I feel

Open up my insides to see what I can show

Take a look inside me and then you'll really know

What I have to offer an what I need to do

How much pain you cause me

And how my mind craves you.

"mislead to this"

This doesn't seem right

The walls are caving in

My feelings not expressed

The power of this sin

This tragic loss I feel

The loss of any hope

This painful ride of life
Sit back and take it slow

Why was I not led to know

Instead led to beleive

Beleive in a hopeless world

The downfall of you and me

The fall isnever ending

The pain has just begun

Everything turns to nothing

The hate is soon to come

Thenames in which you call me

The hurt it seems to bring

This endless pain and sorrow

The lies you choose to believe

"forever"

The ways in which I jurt myself

Are those only to hurt you too

I've said a prayer a thousand times

Not knowing what else to do

It's resulted down to this selfishness

My emotions swoop and sway

If you could just be mine again

Forever and a day

-Danielle

 

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Sadgirl2
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Joined : Dec 2004
Posts : 110
Posted 12/14/2004 4:43 PM (GMT -6)

I like the way you express yourself. I hope you feel better soon.

TB

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snohare
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Joined : Oct 2004
Posts : 2088
Posted 12/15/2004 7:37 PM (GMT -6)

To borrow an analogy from another part of my life Danielle, your imagery packs a punch like a twelve pound sledge; compact, but powerful ! yeah

It is a real delight to me to have found poetry here on this forum. Particularly on a subject I can relate to.

For a long time I was inclined not to lurk here, I thought it would bring back bad memories and dangerous trains of thought; but instead I find once again that as so often, at the boundary between dark and light we find meaning in life, and life in expression.

Keep 'em coming, you guys...or I might be forced to tell you my home made Xmas cracker jokes tongue

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Ralph
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Joined : Aug 2004
Posts : 139
Posted 12/17/2004 12:24 PM (GMT -6)
Snohare

On Poetry "I'm really not a poet, although my toes show it, they're Longfellows"
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snohare
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Posted 12/17/2004 7:46 PM (GMT -6)

eyes  Ooh, now that's a cracker !  yeah

 Nice to see you're still on the go Ralph. I've been posting with the Crohnies mainly, too short on time and sleep for my usual edifying stuff ! smurf (That's me with my sleeping cap on, in case you hadn't guessed. Only here during the wee sma' hours...when will Peter come up with a snoozing emoticon ? nono )

I'd say I "ode" you all a bespoke Xmas poem, but you'd probably be "a verse" to it's humour... tongue

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havta_b_luvd
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Joined : Oct 2004
Posts : 56
Posted 12/23/2004 5:47 AM (GMT -6)
:-) :-)
Excellent!! I think the way you teenager express yourselves in your poetry is awesome!! It's a good way to release. My daughter does the same thing. Keep em coming hun!
~Tina~
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