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Date Joined Dec 2004
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   Posted 12/13/2004 10:45 PM (GMT -6)   
yea, here are just some poems i wrote to maybe entertain some people. nothing special, so it wont hurt my feelings if no one likes them, I just can't sleep tonight, I've had a bad day..
"under new ownership"
Despise me, it doesn't even matter
Bring me down and make me feel it
Take my wrists, and slit my wounds
Push me down,
Put me down
Come undone for me, show me what you've got
Prove that you are worthy, tell me that I'm not
Show me your obessions to prove that you're not real
Shove away my doubts, tell me how I feel
Open up my insides to see what I can show
Take a look inside me and then you'll really know
What I have to offer an what I need to do
How much pain you cause me
And how my mind craves you.
"mislead to this"
This doesn't seem right
The walls are caving in
My feelings not expressed
The power of this sin
This tragic loss I feel
The loss of any hope
This painful ride of life
Sit back and take it slow
Why was I not led to know
Instead led to beleive
Beleive in a hopeless world
The downfall of you and me
The fall isnever ending
The pain has just begun
Everything turns to nothing
The hate is soon to come
Thenames in which you call me
The hurt it seems to bring
This endless pain and sorrow
The lies you choose to believe
The ways in which I jurt myself
Are those only to hurt you too
I've said a prayer a thousand times
Not knowing what else to do
It's resulted down to this selfishness
My emotions swoop and sway
If you could just be mine again
Forever and a day

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Date Joined Dec 2004
Total Posts : 110
   Posted 12/14/2004 5:43 PM (GMT -6)   

I like the way you express yourself. I hope you feel better soon.



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Date Joined Oct 2004
Total Posts : 2088
   Posted 12/15/2004 8:37 PM (GMT -6)   

To borrow an analogy from another part of my life Danielle, your imagery packs a punch like a twelve pound sledge; compact, but powerful ! yeah

It is a real delight to me to have found poetry here on this forum. Particularly on a subject I can relate to.

For a long time I was inclined not to lurk here, I thought it would bring back bad memories and dangerous trains of thought; but instead I find once again that as so often, at the boundary between dark and light we find meaning in life, and life in expression.

Keep 'em coming, you guys...or I might be forced to tell you my home made Xmas cracker jokes tongue

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Date Joined Aug 2004
Total Posts : 139
   Posted 12/17/2004 1:24 PM (GMT -6)   

On Poetry "I'm really not a poet, although my toes show it, they're Longfellows"

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   Posted 12/17/2004 8:46 PM (GMT -6)   

eyes  Ooh, now that's a cracker !  yeah

 Nice to see you're still on the go Ralph. I've been posting with the Crohnies mainly, too short on time and sleep for my usual edifying stuff ! smurf (That's me with my sleeping cap on, in case you hadn't guessed. Only here during the wee sma' hours...when will Peter come up with a snoozing emoticon ? nono )

I'd say I "ode" you all a bespoke Xmas poem, but you'd probably be "a verse" to it's humour... tongue

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Total Posts : 56
   Posted 12/23/2004 6:47 AM (GMT -6)   
:-) :-)
Excellent!! I think the way you teenager express yourselves in your poetry is awesome!! It's a good way to release. My daughter does the same thing. Keep em coming hun!

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