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Teenager
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   Posted 1/31/2005 4:22 PM (GMT -7)   

No title (interpret as you wish!)

 

My mind dissecting

Thoughts reflecting

Like an image in the water

A false representation of depth and feeling

As if the world was reeling

I sink my hands into my face

Laced with tears making patterns and shapes

In their effort to escape

A body wrought with pain

Self inflicted

Thoughts that maim

My body wrenches out the sobs

They are my words now

And how I look to them for comfort.

 


Sadgirl2
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   Posted 1/31/2005 5:55 PM (GMT -7)   
This is great work! I am sorry for your pain sad
Terri B
 
 


Teenager
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   Posted 1/31/2005 6:17 PM (GMT -7)   
funny how all the good stuff comes from sadness/anger. lol! Thanks!

Creekaholic
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   Posted 2/1/2005 9:59 AM (GMT -7)   
This is so beautiful! You're extremely talented!
And days go by
I can feel them flying
Like a hand out the window in the wind
And cars go by
Yeah it's all we've been given
So you better start living right now
Cause days go by


Teenager
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   Posted 2/1/2005 5:50 PM (GMT -7)   
Thanks! that means a lot!

maylove
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   Posted 2/1/2005 10:30 PM (GMT -7)   
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