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wolflover
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   Posted 10/11/2010 1:56 PM (GMT -6)   
I wrote a poem in my depression. There's a place with no sun just a moon and no clouds just stars. It is always dim and always dark. There are no houses and there are no cars, nobody seems to live there but me.I'm always searching, though there's nothing you can see. I'm always moving though everything looks the same. There is darkness and there is rain.The ground is like shifting sands.The moon is like an undieing hope that will always be there. The stars are like scars on the empty dark sky.
Every year a new star appears. Every year the rains get stronger and my surroundings seem a little less clear.Sometimes their is a sound, so far yet so near, so beautiful, but so sad. It makes me wonder if I'm the only one here. It keeps me searching and calms my fears. One day I will find this sound, so sweet, Then myself there i will find also to meet. There will be no more darkness and little pain. Until then i will keep searching through this land so drear and i will keep looking ahead until everything seems much clear.

annie.d12345
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   Posted 10/11/2010 3:35 PM (GMT -6)   
Beautiful.... Exactly how I feel....

Take care.
“Faith isn't faith until it's all you're holding on to”

Annie

Taygeta
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   Posted 10/11/2010 5:13 PM (GMT -6)   
Great job of putting your feelings into words.
 
Wish I could write when I'm down.  Cannot get myself to write anything except what needs to be done, i.e. work.  Think about doing it again and again, but just cannot put anything to paper.  
 
 

livenlaugh
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   Posted 10/11/2010 6:17 PM (GMT -6)   
Beautiful...captured how I feel...

wolflover
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   Posted 10/11/2010 6:25 PM (GMT -6)   
thank you.

theHTreturns...
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   Posted 10/13/2010 6:18 AM (GMT -6)   
excellent. may i put one on your thread, it is one i wrote many a year ago. just found it going through some papers. thx. jamie.
YESTERDAY IS A BUTTERLY WITHOUT WINGS. (ME)
 
DX, MDD, SEVERE BORDERLINE PERSONALITY DISORDER.
 
REMEMBER TO LOVE YOU. BE YOU AND BE TRUE.

theHTreturns...
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   Posted 10/13/2010 6:34 AM (GMT -6)   

a ship passes through the mist

-our dreams create visions,

and eons of time

a ship gives and takes

-creates waves

and soothes all the ripples.

a heavy load is our mind

alike the ships cargo

-it weathers the the seas

protects our dreams,

a ship floats on all seas

rough it can be or as smooth as silk

barren too or the ship can be you.

we carry a heavy load-

and more giving than taking

and we sink, of with our heavy load

-container no more-

heavy ship be-gone and set sails to shore.

adrift we can be-alike the ship-not lost but floating

for many a day, gentle winds come our way.

be a boat-have purpose this day

in the mist, a lighthouse we see, hope comes

in a boat. in the seas-land of dreams-drown our boat,

let is sink, and float adrift, grab life, get a grip-

sail with no gale, float on still water, for remember the sea

is our heavenly daughter. THE SEA. JAMIE

SORRY IT IS LONG. maybe kitt can condense it. thx.


wolflover
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   Posted 10/13/2010 9:04 AM (GMT -6)   
OMG! that was so great! You have a gift to. I'm going to save that to my pc. I loved it. :-)

Taygeta
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   Posted 10/13/2010 10:22 AM (GMT -6)   
Jamie!!!
 
Wow!!!!
 
That poem is great, and no, it doesn't need to be even a word shorter!
 
I teach - so I see a lot of writing - and something like this is exactly what shows me I have a talented student. 
 
Scythia 

theHTreturns...
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   Posted 10/14/2010 3:24 AM (GMT -6)   
cheers my good friends!!! jamie. :-)
YESTERDAY IS A BUTTERLY WITHOUT WINGS. (ME)
 
DX, MDD, SEVERE BORDERLINE PERSONALITY DISORDER.
 
REMEMBER TO LOVE YOU. BE YOU AND BE TRUE.
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