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   Posted 12/13/2010 5:36 AM (GMT -6)   
i am blind.
 
the seeing is the knowing,
 
time sees the sea, the birds and trees...........
 
fate sees truth, though our eyes open.............
 
the blind sees dawn.
 
dance the dusk, smell the time of destinys wind,
 
a bird a dove a cheeky grin.
 
tomorrow another day, so was yesterday...........
 
the here and now......i hear the frown!!!
 
with a cane i sense all......................
 
the blind leading the blind.......no more.
 
by me......!!!! hope you like my symbolic tune.
 
jamie
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   Posted 12/13/2010 9:58 AM (GMT -6)   
Very nice Jamie. I really like your poetry.

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   Posted 12/13/2010 2:10 PM (GMT -6)   
THX ALL.........MY FATHER WAS A PUBLISHED POET. I HAVE HAD SOME PUBLISHED ALSO-MY FATHER WAS A CHILDRENS NOVELIST, ALCHOLIC, WAR VET-VEITNAM (MEDIC) AND IN HIS YOUNG DAYS MOULDED COCKPITS FOR MILITARY AVIATION. SADLY I DO NOT KNOW HIM, BUT I DO IN OTHER AREAS. JAMIE
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   Posted 12/13/2010 4:48 PM (GMT -6)   
totally it's genetic. my interpretation is always mine, and i rarely disclose them. i write so others can interp. i enjoyed your symbolic de-construction, shows me that your mind is interpreting to the max. no need for apologies, none at all. actually i say thx to you.
jamie.

thx siobhan, means sooo much. appreciate your kindnes, thn-you.

jamie
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   Posted 12/13/2010 5:05 PM (GMT -6)   
Kind of like with painting. You have certain feelings when you are painting. So you have your own interpretation of it. And if there is something specific going on in your life as you paint or write, it is reflected as well to yourself. Very deep It's Genetic. I am glad that you can see the beauty and conception of it. Many of us would have overlooked it. You are very attentive. That is a special gift.

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PS Jamie, thank you for sharing...
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   Posted 12/13/2010 5:37 PM (GMT -6)   
scool   scool scool scool scool scool scool scool scool scool scool scool scool jamie
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   Posted 12/13/2010 5:43 PM (GMT -6)   
Nicely done, jamiee.  I cannot write but love to read.  I guess you need  readers to appreciate the written word. The written word, or poetry as it is called emanates from the heart of a person . Keep writing jamiee!
 
Kindly,
Kitt

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   Posted 12/13/2010 7:31 PM (GMT -6)   
oh.......nice kitt. thx :-)
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