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InTheShop
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Posted 9/2/2018 6:42 PM (GMT -7)
Yesterday

It was in a gift shop
in a back street
on Montmartre.

I was drawn to it
and the single word, “Yesterday”
printed on the tiny cardboard box.

The little metal handle with the red bead
spun a tune from the past.
One that replayed a youth I’d lost so long ago.
A lament of loss,
of a need to turn back time
and once more I embraced that old feeling of ...

Turning the little red handle
ghosts paraded through
a stifled tear.

At once I wanted to cry pain, cry anger,
to fly back to another time,
to take my hammer and violently build.

I was resigned to
stand in a little shop
where I didn’t understand the language
and just be with an old melancholy.

A presence at my elbow,
“I’ll buy that for you.”
grandson, spending my money on gifts for me.

But what price? Yesterday.

Now the little music box movement,
sits on my desk - just under the computer
and near the desk lamp.

It sits asking that question of yesterday,
of tomorrow,
and today.
I'll be in the shop.
Age 58, 52 at DX
PSA:
4.2 10/11, 1.9 6/12, 1.2 12/12, 1.0 5/13, .6 11/13,
.7 5/14, .5 10/14, .5 4/15, .3 10/15, .3 4/16, .4 10/16, .4 5/17, .3 10/17 .3 4/18
G 3+4
Stage T1C
2 out of 14 cores positive
Treatment IGRT - 2/2012
My latest blog post
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three 5's and a jack
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Posted 9/2/2018 6:53 PM (GMT -7)
No words or praise just thank you.

Roger
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81GyGuy
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Posted 9/3/2018 10:14 AM (GMT -7)
Andrew -

Once again I don my critic's cap and render assessment of your poetical musings, and good musings they are, as usual.

Your word choice and phrasing are well suited to your subject and the thought is compact and poignant. Your reference to a song about "yesterday' inevitably brings up the sounds and images of Paul McCartney's "Yesterday, " and its haunting words and melody.

All of your poems maintain a consistency of message from stanza to stanza, as all good poems do.

Something I especially like about this one is the unseen but subtly expressed attention of the grandson, who has clearly been observing the reactions of his grandfather to the music box, likely his facial sadness, and then offers to buy it for him. A touching gesture on the part of the boy, aptly brought to the reader's notice.

Another good one.
Age: 72
Chronic prostatitis (age 60 on)
BPH w/ urinary obstruction, 6/2011
TURP, 7/2011
Ongoing high PSA, 7/2011-12/2011
Biopsy, 12/2011: positive 3/12 (90%, 70%, 5%)
Gleason 6(3+3), T1c
No mets, PCa likely still organ contained
IMRT w/ HT (Lupron), 4/2012-6/2012
PSAs (since post-IMRT): 0.1 or lower
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island time
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Posted 9/3/2018 3:08 PM (GMT -7)
That's a cool poem. I like it. It speaks for me lol. Thanks Andrew!
PSA 2010 thru 2014...4.0 +/- .7
Dx 12/14 @ 56 yo...2 cores G6 <5%, 1 core G6 20%, 1 core HGPIN.
RALP 11/25/15...3+4. 3 to 5 mm surgical margin 15% involvement pT2+
PSA's....2/16-.01...4/16-.00...7/16-.00...10/16-.01...1/17-.01...4/17-.02...7/17-.02
10/17-.02...01/18-.05...03/18-.014...04/18-.02...07/18-.047
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Wings of Eagles
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Posted 9/3/2018 3:20 PM (GMT -7)
Andrew,

Another great lyrical masterpiece. I really really loved it. Thank you for taking me to that place, I was "engaged" in every line. Often I want to "fly back to another time". Thank you for being a poet and knowing your subject expertly!

P. S. please disregard if you want my post on that other rather lengthy debate filled other recent thread ..you know which one..so sorry to hear about your mom', but I am sure you celebrate her grace and what she taught you always
Dan
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InTheShop
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Posted 9/3/2018 4:31 PM (GMT -7)
Roger - thanks

81 - thanks for your words on my poem. I'm a bit of an intuitive poet and rarely "think" a poem through - these are "felt."

IT - glad you found something in it.

Dan - it's always a good feeling to know a poem of mine has touched some one. The other thread, is a different thread. My mother was a good teacher and her last lesson was powerful.

Peace,
Andrew
I'll be in the shop.
Age 58, 52 at DX
PSA:
4.2 10/11, 1.9 6/12, 1.2 12/12, 1.0 5/13, .6 11/13,
.7 5/14, .5 10/14, .5 4/15, .3 10/15, .3 4/16, .4 10/16, .4 5/17, .3 10/17 .3 4/18
G 3+4
Stage T1C
2 out of 14 cores positive
Treatment IGRT - 2/2012
My latest blog post
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dbell
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Posted 9/4/2018 5:47 AM (GMT -7)
Good stuff here as always, ANDREW!! Your thoughts always paint a picture in my mind, so mission accomplished! yeah
Age 54
DX 11/17
PSA 5.03
G7 3+4 - 5% "4" - on 2nd BX 2/26, initially G6 3 + 3 on 11/17
1 core of 16 - 35% involvement, confirmed by MSKCC
MRI 2/19 - 1 core PI-RAD-2, Prostate size 73cc, IMRT/IGRT - 7/18, 26 treatments
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InTheShop
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Posted 9/4/2018 1:37 PM (GMT -7)
Thanks - a poem should build an image or feeling - it should paint a feeling with words.
I'll be in the shop.
Age 58, 52 at DX
PSA:
4.2 10/11, 1.9 6/12, 1.2 12/12, 1.0 5/13, .6 11/13,
.7 5/14, .5 10/14, .5 4/15, .3 10/15, .3 4/16, .4 10/16, .4 5/17, .3 10/17 .3 4/18
G 3+4
Stage T1C
2 out of 14 cores positive
Treatment IGRT - 2/2012
My latest blog post
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logoslidat
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Posted 9/4/2018 7:57 PM (GMT -7)
Gosh...I hate" should " in the 21st century...but......your poem is good...and subsequent poems will get better...once you figure out that after the the poem is "performed"....the poet disappears...the poem praises...adulates...critiques...the poet is merely an after thought...and Mary still does the better...tho Martha is needed or Mary disappears... a decent description of transfiguration...for anyone into that...

I suppose this post may be a good test for this thesis...it will pass...everything does.... devil scool

I use the term perform with deliberation...I wont explain its use...the light...the light...it burns...it burns...the light...the light....
gleason 9 contained stopped psa testing jan 2015 with two consecutive psa's a year apart at 0.15
surgery 10/09 only treatment...eyes wide open...no sand...gonna live til I die...not the reverse forgive my virtues as well as my sins...

Post Edited (logoslidat) : 9/4/2018 10:39:19 PM (GMT-6)

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mr bill
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Posted 9/6/2018 5:52 AM (GMT -7)
Brings the song "Those Were the Days," sung by Mary Hopkins, to mind.
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81GyGuy
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Posted 9/6/2018 6:36 AM (GMT -7)
I once posted a Youtube video of Mary Hopkins performing that charming song. It was in another thread about taking a nostalgic look back at the past.

I would think the current topic merits hearing it again:

/www.youtube.com/watch?v=y3KEhWTnWvE
Age: 72
Chronic prostatitis (age 60 on)
BPH w/ urinary obstruction, 6/2011
TURP, 7/2011
Ongoing high PSA, 7/2011-12/2011
Biopsy, 12/2011: positive 3/12 (90%, 70%, 5%)
Gleason 6(3+3), T1c
No mets, PCa likely still organ contained
IMRT w/ HT (Lupron), 4/2012-6/2012
PSAs (since post-IMRT): 0.1 or lower
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bw1963
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Posted 9/6/2018 7:36 AM (GMT -7)
Brings back memory's... Thanks Andrew.
Bill
Dx 5/2018 Age:54
DRE positive
PSA 4.0
Volume @ Biopsy 31cc @ mpMRI 45cc
Epstein
5 cores G6 1 core G7: 3+4
mpMRI 4 Lesions 2 left\2 right PRIADS 4,3,3,4
Enlarged bilateral external iliac chain lymph nodes and no suspicious bone lesions.
Oncotype DX score 37
9/19/2018 scheduled RP w PNLD
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InTheShop
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Posts : 10401
Posted 9/6/2018 1:31 PM (GMT -7)
I always liked that song. Thanks guys.

Andrew
I'll be in the shop.
Age 58, 52 at DX
PSA:
4.2 10/11, 1.9 6/12, 1.2 12/12, 1.0 5/13, .6 11/13,
.7 5/14, .5 10/14, .5 4/15, .3 10/15, .3 4/16, .4 10/16, .4 5/17, .3 10/17 .3 4/18
G 3+4
Stage T1C
2 out of 14 cores positive
Treatment IGRT - 2/2012
My latest blog post
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Subdenis
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Posted 9/7/2018 4:26 AM (GMT -7)
Very nice words, all of my yesterdays caused me to be who I am today. Denis
65YO healthy man, PSA 5/17 4.6, MPMRI, 5/17 lesion. 13 core biopsy 3 positive 3+3 and 1 positive in a lesion, All cores less than 30% 8/17 - the second opinion Yale pathology shows a small amount of (3+4) in one core, < 5%, decipher test shows intermediate risks. HDR BT completed 2/6/18. 5/3/18 3 month Post HDR BT PSA 1.3
Denis
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garyi
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Posted 9/7/2018 6:36 AM (GMT -7)
Wonderful. Montmartre Is a very special place for me.

You can’t leave, Andrew redface
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kit49
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Posts : 70
Posted 9/7/2018 6:40 AM (GMT -7)
Beautiful.
Please do not leave.
Husband’s Psa 5.7 dec 2017. Repeated- PSA 5.7 fPSA 15.3
2/7/18 DRE: “35, assymetrical” ordered Pca3
2/15- new MD- DRE: 35, no nodules
2/27 MRI Pi-RADS 5, epe
3/21 biopsy- 4/2 - 7/16 cores ca, 3+4 right mid 40%, 3+3 in other cores 70% left lateral apex
Slides sent to Epstein
Epstein- 4+3(70% gleason pattern 4). 3+4(10% gleason pattern 4),
Started ebrt 7/17/18
Started casodex 7/24/18
Eligard 8/2-
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InTheShop
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Posted 9/8/2018 7:29 AM (GMT -7)
Denis - we are the sum of all our yesterdays
Gary - I've only been there once, but would like to see it again someday.
Kit - thank you.
I'll be in the shop.
Age 58, 52 at DX
PSA:
4.2 10/11, 1.9 6/12, 1.2 12/12, 1.0 5/13, .6 11/13,
.7 5/14, .5 10/14, .5 4/15, .3 10/15, .3 4/16, .4 10/16, .4 5/17, .3 10/17 .3 4/18
G 3+4
Stage T1C
2 out of 14 cores positive
Treatment IGRT - 2/2012
My latest blog post
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Michael_T
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Posted 9/8/2018 7:47 AM (GMT -7)
How did I miss this poem earlier? On the other hand, reading it now with a cup of coffee is such a nice way to start my Saturday morning!
Age 57, Diagnosed at 51
PSA 9.6, Gleason: 9 (5+4), three 7s (3+4)
Chose triple play of HDR brachy, IMRT and HT (Casodex, Lupron and Zytiga)
Completed HT (18 months) in April 2014
3/18: PSA = 0.09
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InTheShop
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Posts : 10401
Posted 9/8/2018 8:25 AM (GMT -7)
my poems are often missed here - they don't generate many comments and are a bit ephemeral.

I post most of my poems to my blog, I just post a few here that I think are relevant to the HW audience.

peace,
Andrew
I'll be in the shop.
Age 58, 52 at DX
PSA:
4.2 10/11, 1.9 6/12, 1.2 12/12, 1.0 5/13, .6 11/13,
.7 5/14, .5 10/14, .5 4/15, .3 10/15, .3 4/16, .4 10/16, .4 5/17, .3 10/17 .3 4/18
G 3+4
Stage T1C
2 out of 14 cores positive
Treatment IGRT - 2/2012
My latest blog post
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