yes I did write it...I feared it may offend as too grim,,,it was meant to be...It scared me as I wrote it and I couldn't stop...a Stephen King kine chill...it still chills when I read.it...thank you so much for your comments logo
your poem reminded me of THE SCENE from bone tomahawk which conjured up visions of the brutality of prostate snatching. you were afraid to offend someone? you're getting soft in your old age buddy...…..
WARNING: NOT FOR THE FAINT OF HEART!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lctm2c1_sag&t=59s